I really like this one and think it has great potential to scale up. I like the little flashes of yellow in the strips and the linear pattern in the circles. My idea is to represent 'stillness' so maybe there is just a little too much movement in how the circles are placed. On a larger piece I could maybe try to use the circles in a gentle, undulating curve across the piece.
This definitely doesn't say 'stillness' to me but it is interesting. I like the flashes of golden yellow against the monochromatic background. It doesn't show very clearly but some of the detail in the pale grey areas is lovely and would work well in a 'Dunure 3' type composition. More to follow soon!